when's chapter 2 cumming???????? this will be a very hot story keep going!!!!!
by
Anonymous08/09/06
Anxiously waiting the finish
Please finish this story....I am excited to read "The rest of the story.... Good Day"
by
Anonymous07/14/10
k... so then what?
Nice lead in, kind of like going to a restraunt hungry, having a good appetizer, then getting told to leave.
Not satisfying in the least...
You've got decent flow and descriptives, just need to finish the story.
Damn.....
when's chapter 2 cumming???????? this will be a very hot story keep going!!!!!
Anxiously waiting the finish
Please finish this story....I am excited to read "The rest of the story.... Good Day"
k... so then what?
Nice lead in, kind of like going to a restraunt hungry, having a good appetizer, then getting told to leave.
Not satisfying in the least...
You've got decent flow and descriptives, just need to finish the story.
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