All Comments on 'Caribbean Sun'

I quit reading when the 8 x 2 was announced but up till then it was nicely done.

Hi Seadiver! Loved your story (despite the big cock and tits!) I always go for brother sister stuff... look up my stories if you like - Susan2002. Let me know what you think...

I was grabbed quickly by the description and it's obvious you were in the military, and perhaps if I hadn't been in the military, I may not have known what you were talking about.

The only inconsistency (is that a word?) that I noticed was that he invited his entire family to go on the trip, but only his sister accepted. Then we're told that his parents died?

Other than those two things (and some unbelievable sizes) it wa a pretty good story! I hope you keep writing them!

I wanted to read more... if anything it was too short. I could see that there was real love and horniness there on the boat. I wanted thenm to explore more sexually. So the ending was sort of a let down for me.... but overall it was an excellent story.

I think this story would have been so hot if you as gotten into the minds of the characters. How did the brother like seeing his naked sister? Did she give peep shows? Did she turn him on by going topless around other boaters. As a reader this ending was really unsatisfying and lazy writing by the author. One star .

Okay nice idea, much but too fast, no build up...