I guess he got what he wanted but he didn't find out why she felt she had to fuck Kevin all the time.
He might be a bastard but she is definitely a slut.
by
08/02/06
Sure a good argument for reforming
the divorce laws!
I can't say she gets a lot of sympathy from me ... she played with fire and got burnt!
If anyone was the winner I'd say it was Ron.
Good story, Bob.
Regards, DJ
by
Anonymous08/02/06
i like the story
not one of your usual stories.
by
Anonymous08/02/06
What's this?
its different from his usual, but he's not that good making revenge stories. i would rather he stick to cuckold stories. he seems to know that subject very well.
It was fantasy, it over over the top, and totally unbelieveable, but at least the husband didn't just sit in a corner crying "Why did this happen to me". He did something about it. Just not what you would have thought. While I personally am a big fan of just leaving the situation and not to get revenge, something can be said for the revenge path every once in a while.
It did have some of the elements of JPB's stories in it (Sloppy seconds or thirds, etc) enough that at times I was repulsed as normal, but it still was a good read even with all of that slid in.
Someone said Ron would be the winner. But, I think if she just thought things through here a little she could get rape charges against her husband and Ron and old black cock Ronnie could easily end up with child support payments. I don't think he should be thought of as a winner. He could be the big loser.
There was some unrealism, such as why he didn't realize that she was cheating when he found out that he was sterile. HELLO, the kids aren't HIS! However, it was still a rather interesting revenge plot, and given how the wife behaved, I don't blame him for setting her up. It's not like she wasn't cheating already. I just wonder he could have kept up the patience to portray the "doting cuckold husband" of his cheating wife.
This is still a fascinating, suspenseful plot, and it was a lot of fun to read. Since I've never really agreed with that saying, either, I have to say that I prefer to read about actual consequences sometimes. Not that a naughty spouse getting away with it isn't a guilty pleasure, but a good dose of retaliation fits my keen sense of karmic justice. There was karma in spades on this.
Then there was the hubby's sense of humor. Yes, he seemed to have plenty of it, which probably helped, given how pissed-off and agitated he'd have to be. I'm not sure that I would have found too much hilarious if I were him. But, of course, I was on the outside, so I could laugh at some of the absurdity of it all. That the wife couldn't see that she was being set up was the biggest joke of all, of course, and THAT I would have found humorous, even at my angriest.
Give this one a 4. It was a nice plot, but the lack of realism on the sterility issue cost it a point in the believability aspect. I don't agree with those who suggested that JPB return to cuck stuff. I like seeing him branch out into revenge stories. For one thing, it confuses everyone, and that is a nice joke as well. Hope he continues and improves in this genre of vengeful husbands.
Severus: he didn't find out he was sterile; he had a vasectomy when she decided that she wanted a third kid. In other words, he made himself sterile. Granted, the other two kids might not have been his either, and a DNA test on them would clear that up right away.
Little things tend to bug me, and the line about how "she put her cock into his mouth" is the reason that this story didn't get 100 from me.
I agree with SEVERUSMAX: the hubby playing the caring, loving husband for six months isn't credible. He will either a) blow it and let something slip, b) fall into depression, or c) lose patience and get on with the divorce.
It is apparent that there is no respect in the marriage. The wife cheats on the husband and he cares so little for her that he doesn't tell her that he's become sterile. The foundation underpinning the marriage is already cracked and the collapse is only accelerated by the infidelty.
I suppose that I disagree with JPB's basic premise b/c I do believe that living well is the best revenge. In the story, the hubby endures six months of misery and hateful indifference to what end? A short-lived euphoria of "Gotcha, bitch. Take that." He may feel relief, even joy, at the dissolution of the marriage but in no sense of the word is the man happy. Smug in his "vindication" but not happy.
His actions to facilitate a favorable outcome in the divorce are despicable. He enticed another man to be unfaithful, ruined his ex-wife's relationship with her relatives, caused a child to enter the world who will grow up in a broken home, and committed felony assault and battery. He's a criminal on many levels and certainly not a person with whom I would associate.
The good news is that he's now sterile and cannot add further to the gene pool so I guess every cloud does have its silver lining.
I always read your stories, but with a bit of trepidation - -the husbands are always wimps and the cheating wives/ex-wives are always putting one (or more) over on him. The situations never seem life like, so even though the stories are well written and start with interesting premises, I am always left disappointed.
Not this time - - this was a well written story with a real world reaction by the jilted husband and a compelling tale throughout.
Thanks for writing and posting this one. A winner! Keep it up.
by
Anonymous08/02/06
BRAVO # 14
Excellent story! Well written! Believable!
by
Anonymous08/03/06
Living well... written well...
Enjoyed the story and I loved the revenge.
by
Anonymous08/03/06
I Gave It A !00 Because
it had a good beat and was easy to dance 2. Well really because I'm trying to encourage the writer to do more of these and less the other (you know).
Seriously, this kind of story appeals to and entertains more readers and selfishly I'm one of them - so go Bobie - make believers of the majority of us.
In reality it wouldn't have been that cut and dried with the black kiddo as lawyers would have found a way to make the husband pay, but it rated high as you seemed to enjoy yourself and actually worked out a story the way a normal person would think.
JPB I rarely ever give a score of 100 but this one deserves it. OH and to Charleybear, she can't file "rape" charges BECAUSE her husband TOLD her he was bringing a friend over, and she started moaning his name. She AGREED to everything her husband did, she was even BEGGING for it. Like the old saying goes "You Can't Rape A Willing Soul"!!
Thanks Bob......
This is still one of my favs, Bob. Right up there w/ Vonnie & The Long Weekend; not to mention Sweetmeat. Sorry that you've not written much new lately, I've gotten used to all your stories, even the ones w/ endings that distress me. Oh, well, post some more, you need the challenge. Thanks again.
by
Anonymous11/22/07
Bad!! Real Bad!!!
Yah that was a revenge. Good enough, i Guess! But, honestly I just don't understand how in hell you can justify the revenge through a Child who is innocent to all the mess! The baby is sure gonna go through a hell growing up .. being a black by a white mother, a bastard and all. It is very very much unjust to victimize a kid for anyone's revenge. Well it's only my opinion.
I know it's a fiction!!! But still it left a foul taste!!!
It took too long to get his revenge. He should have beat the shit out of Kevin way before she had the baby. Still she got screwed in the end. A fitting life for a cheating whore slut wife. Fuck her.
1. Let's hear from the ladies. If you were blindfolded and fucking missionary style, could you tell if it was NOT your husband of 9-10 years?
2. I continue to be amazed at the lover's vehicle being parked in the driveway or in front of the house. I've read this in so many stories. This one may have been even more UNbelievable since it was two "NAPA" trucks.
There is nobody to like in this story and too many problems as well. First of all, what kind of an asshole goes behind his wife's back and gets a vasectomy? That would count as an ultimate lie and betrayal of his marriage. He should have just stood his ground and suffered the consequences.
Also, are there really married couples out there who always use condoms unless they are trying to conceive? That is just sad (and oh so unbelievable).
Next, what kind of guy is Ron that he is willing to sire a child and never own up to it or provide for its care? As a husband with 5 children, he does not seem the type to make such a decision so lightly.
Lastly, it is doubtful that hubby would have been granted custody of the children even given the circumstances presented. However, it is even more doubtful that he would have gotten away with his little scheme.
Sandy had to know that her husband set her up. A little research by her attorney would have turned up that her husband had a good friend named Ron who was black. A threatened lawsuit and associated DNA test would have loosened Ron's tongue. Hubby would have been up against a host of charges and Ron would have found himself paying child support and possibly divorced.
There were no likable characters and too many holes in the plot for this story to be enjoyable.
by
Anonymous02/07/15
@Betterending
It was very good. So whine your way over to the cuck stories.
I just reread this story and realized that I had not commented on the thing that bothered me the most. Old Kevin got a free pass. Where was the revenge on him? He should have been the prime target for a little justice, considering "Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's wife" and all that.
I also did not like the whole angle with Ron. The child does not deserve to face the life he will have to face. It would have been better if it had been Kevin's kid. At least then he would have to pony up for some child support.
Oh, and to Anonymous on 02/07/15, piss off you simple minded ass. You can fantasize about all of the cuck stories you want. I don't care for them myself.
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Anonymous10/09/15
BetterEnding
You read the story twice and didn't notice the part where Kevin was severely beaten and robbed? It was implied that the husband set that up while his buddies supplied the alibi.
What he and Ron did was nothing short of a rape... and that is the reason I don't like this story
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Anonymous01/01/16
Well that was some revenge.
But I STILL don't think a Judge gives him custody. Not in today's Court system. The Court would have mandated Child Protective Services to interview the kids and guess who loved their Mother, regardless of her cheating? So she got the kids, alimony, child support and the home until the kids all graduated. That, my friends, is how the Courts roll these days. Good fantasy story, but the truth was he got screwed.
Bad job of making this story even remotely readable. The husband is the worst person in the whole thing lol . she is better off out of his life. She has a black baby but knows she has never slept with a black guy, Easy to figure out what happened thus hubby and Ron get prison. Just ridiculous and don't say it's fiction. fiction means it isn't a true story this is just fantasy, big difference.
While I agree that how this was carried out was wrong...
There was at least one comment that played the "rape card." That I don't agree with. Point of fact, during one of their sessions he flat out told her that a guy he knows with 5 kids is going to get her pregnant.
In the end none of the characters was likable and all of their actions was, in my opinion, reprehensible. But, sadly, I could identify all of these characters as people I've known in my past, so I can't say that (excepting the court verdict) it was way off base.
Well written even if I didn't agree with the character choices.
While the wife was fucking around, did she in fact ever fuck a black guy and if not she might have had some legal recourse. Also i would have liked to have read about the wife's reasons for 1- cheating and 2 wanting another baby.
English
One hell of a devious mind
I guess he got what he wanted but he didn't find out why she felt she had to fuck Kevin all the time.
He might be a bastard but she is definitely a slut.
Sure a good argument for reforming
the divorce laws!
I can't say she gets a lot of sympathy from me ... she played with fire and got burnt!
If anyone was the winner I'd say it was Ron.
Good story, Bob.
Regards, DJ
i like the story
not one of your usual stories.
What's this?
its different from his usual, but he's not that good making revenge stories. i would rather he stick to cuckold stories. he seems to know that subject very well.
While this isn't JPB's normal
I have to say I liked it.
It was fantasy, it over over the top, and totally unbelieveable, but at least the husband didn't just sit in a corner crying "Why did this happen to me". He did something about it. Just not what you would have thought. While I personally am a big fan of just leaving the situation and not to get revenge, something can be said for the revenge path every once in a while.
It did have some of the elements of JPB's stories in it (Sloppy seconds or thirds, etc) enough that at times I was repulsed as normal, but it still was a good read even with all of that slid in.
-Risq
Here you go Bob
Now the cuck fans will be after you.
Someone said Ron would be the winner. But, I think if she just thought things through here a little she could get rape charges against her husband and Ron and old black cock Ronnie could easily end up with child support payments. I don't think he should be thought of as a winner. He could be the big loser.
Good story.
Charleybear
This will be mentioned on the AH.
There was some unrealism, such as why he didn't realize that she was cheating when he found out that he was sterile. HELLO, the kids aren't HIS! However, it was still a rather interesting revenge plot, and given how the wife behaved, I don't blame him for setting her up. It's not like she wasn't cheating already. I just wonder he could have kept up the patience to portray the "doting cuckold husband" of his cheating wife.
This is still a fascinating, suspenseful plot, and it was a lot of fun to read. Since I've never really agreed with that saying, either, I have to say that I prefer to read about actual consequences sometimes. Not that a naughty spouse getting away with it isn't a guilty pleasure, but a good dose of retaliation fits my keen sense of karmic justice. There was karma in spades on this.
Then there was the hubby's sense of humor. Yes, he seemed to have plenty of it, which probably helped, given how pissed-off and agitated he'd have to be. I'm not sure that I would have found too much hilarious if I were him. But, of course, I was on the outside, so I could laugh at some of the absurdity of it all. That the wife couldn't see that she was being set up was the biggest joke of all, of course, and THAT I would have found humorous, even at my angriest.
Give this one a 4. It was a nice plot, but the lack of realism on the sterility issue cost it a point in the believability aspect. I don't agree with those who suggested that JPB return to cuck stuff. I like seeing him branch out into revenge stories. For one thing, it confuses everyone, and that is a nice joke as well. Hope he continues and improves in this genre of vengeful husbands.
i think you missed something
Severus: he didn't find out he was sterile; he had a vasectomy when she decided that she wanted a third kid. In other words, he made himself sterile. Granted, the other two kids might not have been his either, and a DNA test on them would clear that up right away.
Little things tend to bug me, and the line about how "she put her cock into his mouth" is the reason that this story didn't get 100 from me.
Clangs and gongs
I agree with SEVERUSMAX: the hubby playing the caring, loving husband for six months isn't credible. He will either a) blow it and let something slip, b) fall into depression, or c) lose patience and get on with the divorce.
It is apparent that there is no respect in the marriage. The wife cheats on the husband and he cares so little for her that he doesn't tell her that he's become sterile. The foundation underpinning the marriage is already cracked and the collapse is only accelerated by the infidelty.
I suppose that I disagree with JPB's basic premise b/c I do believe that living well is the best revenge. In the story, the hubby endures six months of misery and hateful indifference to what end? A short-lived euphoria of "Gotcha, bitch. Take that." He may feel relief, even joy, at the dissolution of the marriage but in no sense of the word is the man happy. Smug in his "vindication" but not happy.
His actions to facilitate a favorable outcome in the divorce are despicable. He enticed another man to be unfaithful, ruined his ex-wife's relationship with her relatives, caused a child to enter the world who will grow up in a broken home, and committed felony assault and battery. He's a criminal on many levels and certainly not a person with whom I would associate.
The good news is that he's now sterile and cannot add further to the gene pool so I guess every cloud does have its silver lining.
Surprise....
I always read your stories, but with a bit of trepidation - -the husbands are always wimps and the cheating wives/ex-wives are always putting one (or more) over on him. The situations never seem life like, so even though the stories are well written and start with interesting premises, I am always left disappointed.
Not this time - - this was a well written story with a real world reaction by the jilted husband and a compelling tale throughout.
Thanks for writing and posting this one. A winner! Keep it up.
BRAVO # 14
Excellent story! Well written! Believable!
Living well... written well...
Enjoyed the story and I loved the revenge.
I Gave It A !00 Because
it had a good beat and was easy to dance 2. Well really because I'm trying to encourage the writer to do more of these and less the other (you know).
Seriously, this kind of story appeals to and entertains more readers and selfishly I'm one of them - so go Bobie - make believers of the majority of us.
Thanks
100 as God knows you enjoyed yourself
In reality it wouldn't have been that cut and dried with the black kiddo as lawyers would have found a way to make the husband pay, but it rated high as you seemed to enjoy yourself and actually worked out a story the way a normal person would think.
Good
One of your better stories. Who is the real JPB?
Boyd
Good story!
JPB I rarely ever give a score of 100 but this one deserves it. OH and to Charleybear, she can't file "rape" charges BECAUSE her husband TOLD her he was bringing a friend over, and she started moaning his name. She AGREED to everything her husband did, she was even BEGGING for it. Like the old saying goes "You Can't Rape A Willing Soul"!!
Thanks Bob......
Paul
STILL one of your best
This is still one of my favs, Bob. Right up there w/ Vonnie & The Long Weekend; not to mention Sweetmeat. Sorry that you've not written much new lately, I've gotten used to all your stories, even the ones w/ endings that distress me. Oh, well, post some more, you need the challenge. Thanks again.
Bad!! Real Bad!!!
Yah that was a revenge. Good enough, i Guess! But, honestly I just don't understand how in hell you can justify the revenge through a Child who is innocent to all the mess! The baby is sure gonna go through a hell growing up .. being a black by a white mother, a bastard and all. It is very very much unjust to victimize a kid for anyone's revenge. Well it's only my opinion.
I know it's a fiction!!! But still it left a foul taste!!!
One of your best
I hate your cuckold stories but when your write along these lines your just couldn't be better.
First time for everything, I guess
But I agree, for the most part, with Alvaron. Also, bringing an innocent (the child) into the plot was just evil.
Fuck You!!!
Fuck You....Sincerely....a Black baby
Didn't get even:
Looks like he got at least one up. HA HA HA HA HA.
I would have rated it 5 stars.
However, the criminal assault and beating of Kevin was so outragious and uncalled for that I rated it 1*.
gave it 5 even with the black baby BS
the wife was a whore anywqay
Good Read!!!
Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story.
I GUESS OUR BOY HAS FORGOTTEN A LOT OF CLICHES
about the laugher, the vas-cut, and not counting the chickens, TK U MLJ LV NV
Only Fair
It took too long to get his revenge. He should have beat the shit out of Kevin way before she had the baby. Still she got screwed in the end. A fitting life for a cheating whore slut wife. Fuck her.
HA
excellent read
i enjoyed reading this. Well written and the bitch got what she deserved.
A little cold
Using a baby to get even is on the sick side. That was a deal breaker for me in this story. eck!
I really liked this one, but
1. Let's hear from the ladies. If you were blindfolded and fucking missionary style, could you tell if it was NOT your husband of 9-10 years?
2. I continue to be amazed at the lover's vehicle being parked in the driveway or in front of the house. I've read this in so many stories. This one may have been even more UNbelievable since it was two "NAPA" trucks.
Not so Good
There is nobody to like in this story and too many problems as well. First of all, what kind of an asshole goes behind his wife's back and gets a vasectomy? That would count as an ultimate lie and betrayal of his marriage. He should have just stood his ground and suffered the consequences.
Also, are there really married couples out there who always use condoms unless they are trying to conceive? That is just sad (and oh so unbelievable).
Next, what kind of guy is Ron that he is willing to sire a child and never own up to it or provide for its care? As a husband with 5 children, he does not seem the type to make such a decision so lightly.
Lastly, it is doubtful that hubby would have been granted custody of the children even given the circumstances presented. However, it is even more doubtful that he would have gotten away with his little scheme.
Sandy had to know that her husband set her up. A little research by her attorney would have turned up that her husband had a good friend named Ron who was black. A threatened lawsuit and associated DNA test would have loosened Ron's tongue. Hubby would have been up against a host of charges and Ron would have found himself paying child support and possibly divorced.
There were no likable characters and too many holes in the plot for this story to be enjoyable.
@Betterending
It was very good. So whine your way over to the cuck stories.
Not so Good II
I just reread this story and realized that I had not commented on the thing that bothered me the most. Old Kevin got a free pass. Where was the revenge on him? He should have been the prime target for a little justice, considering "Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's wife" and all that.
I also did not like the whole angle with Ron. The child does not deserve to face the life he will have to face. It would have been better if it had been Kevin's kid. At least then he would have to pony up for some child support.
Oh, and to Anonymous on 02/07/15, piss off you simple minded ass. You can fantasize about all of the cuck stories you want. I don't care for them myself.
BetterEnding
You read the story twice and didn't notice the part where Kevin was severely beaten and robbed? It was implied that the husband set that up while his buddies supplied the alibi.
Nothing to like
What he and Ron did was nothing short of a rape... and that is the reason I don't like this story
Well that was some revenge.
But I STILL don't think a Judge gives him custody. Not in today's Court system. The Court would have mandated Child Protective Services to interview the kids and guess who loved their Mother, regardless of her cheating? So she got the kids, alimony, child support and the home until the kids all graduated. That, my friends, is how the Courts roll these days. Good fantasy story, but the truth was he got screwed.
Wow how stupid.......bad even for JPB
Bad job of making this story even remotely readable. The husband is the worst person in the whole thing lol . she is better off out of his life. She has a black baby but knows she has never slept with a black guy, Easy to figure out what happened thus hubby and Ron get prison. Just ridiculous and don't say it's fiction. fiction means it isn't a true story this is just fantasy, big difference.
Loved It!
Only thing - will Ron get hit for child support?
While I agree that how this was carried out was wrong...
There was at least one comment that played the "rape card." That I don't agree with. Point of fact, during one of their sessions he flat out told her that a guy he knows with 5 kids is going to get her pregnant.
In the end none of the characters was likable and all of their actions was, in my opinion, reprehensible. But, sadly, I could identify all of these characters as people I've known in my past, so I can't say that (excepting the court verdict) it was way off base.
Well written even if I didn't agree with the character choices.
Hahaha!
5* for a funny short!
question
While the wife was fucking around, did she in fact ever fuck a black guy and if not she might have had some legal recourse. Also i would have liked to have read about the wife's reasons for 1- cheating and 2 wanting another baby.
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