All Comments on 'Is This The Lady I Married?'

Its pretty plain that she does not love you , just power and having a new permanent slave for her and her friends (female). Its proabbly too late to start a new life anywhere local without blackmail and blackmail pictures etc.

Leave her, you will have lost nothing.

Ignore the previous asshole. Just because it isn"t his thing he thinks nobody should like it. I hope there is a part two coming.

I enjoyed the set-up and the delivery of a seemingly realistic situation. The pacing was well-done and the first-person perspective worked.

I would have liked to see more dialogue, however, and a little more proofreading would help eliminate some stumbling blocks in the prose.

Seems like both Paul and Becky are getting what they deserve. Keep up the good work!