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A Hard Game Ch. 01

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by MeanElf01/31/07

Rich

A very tasty start, full of rich promise, hence the title. Thank you for writing so well, and for taking the time to do so; it enrichens the genre and proves that well written erotica has a lot to offer.

Thanks once more and here's looking forward to the next piece.

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by Anonymous08/25/08

OFF with a BANG but .....

Why stopped after a flying start? Continue with unabashed flame and ignite our lives. Best wishes to continue.

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by gogreen09/12/11

nice start shame it looks ot be unfinished.

wow.

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by Anonymous12/02/15

Perfection

Thats erotic! Rest ? Plz

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