Sarah's Part Time Job

Good story

She was just too damn good to allow her to get away. I think she softened him up well!
And she turned out to be everything he needed and wanted!!

That "Wakey, wakey" bit cracked me up.

A good story with a good ending, JPB.

wow that was really good and hot

you surprised me JPB

Great!

Great story. Happy ending! Terrific!

Another good one, Bob!

Nice job - I liked the characters in this. It was a fun read.

Regards, DJ

well done

fantastic story. keep up the good work

well done

slow, steady and small steps in a
methodical approach to get what he wants

Very Nice

Bob, You have a talented way of taking a plain sex topic and making an enjoyable story from it.

Outdid yourself

You're always good, Bob, but this time you outdid your self.
I've head of guys doing some unusual things to win a woman, but I think this one was really unique.

Outdid yourself

You're always good, Bob, but this time you outdid your self.
I've head of guys doing some unusual things to win a woman, but I think this one was really unique.

perfect

you're a pro! great work.

very nice

it was great, i think you should write the next part that was eluded too. thanks for your stories they are always good reads keep up the good work

Good writing, but.......

I suppose that I will be in the moral minority, here. Good story as far as the technical elements go. You do have style. But, I have to confess that I found the calculated manipluations of this man, and his willingness to take advantage of a woman in a bad situation, quite reprehensible. Yes, I know, "all's well that ends well," but I think if the lady were to find out what actually transpired and the motivation behind it, there quite possibly would be another divorce in the works.

Love is too much

While I didn't love it, this was alot better than the stuff posted weeks ago.
To each their own but it would have been more erotic without the paying for it and her just being seduced with remorse. Since you were going from pig to hero, it would have gotten you there and married alot more in your style of the good guy.

Great read of deception and seduction

I have to agree with Queen of Mars and Nightowl22. This one just hit me right, I did enjoy it. Just my moral compass and the head games, but its fantasy and dang good. It was as good a seduction plot as any and the wank of a husband made it all innocuous.
Great fun
PT

Crap!

What a silly piece of crap. Predictable, silly & down right booooooring!

JPB

GET A LIFE!! STOP spending every waking moment write this bullshit!! If you must write PLEASE spend a little time and produce a decent story or GET A LIFE!!!

A Little Disappointing

I thought that this story would have been more believable if, when the narrator asks the woman to become his courtesan, she had just told him no chance. After all, he's just spent months corrupting her and turning her into a prostitute; it would be a much more satisfying story if she decided to not hqave anything to do with him any more. "Sorry, our relationship is just business."

Great beginning

Had to rate this story 100 Bob, it was really good. Very well written.

I hope you will continue on with it. This could be one of the best stories of all time in this catagory. We already know she is willing to do strangers for her kids sake, let's see her do some for her husbands sake.

Thanks again,
George

good job

good job bob, once again - this is definitely one of my favs! Keep doing stories like this..

Missed this one

Man, what a fun story. Can't believe I missed this one when it first came out. I've never published anything I've written, but I'm workin on a story similar to this one you wrote except I'm bribing my wife for sex. Keep up the great writing you do.

Just found this one

I just found this one and as you can tell by the rating I liked it. It was good to see a plan come together and then exceed his expectations. Good job. I guess I'm going to have to start at story number one and read all of your work.

Was it hidden?????

Bootylicious tail/tale, must have missed it along the way. Poignant, funny, and oh so HOT. Thank you.

I debated on 4**** or 5****

No realistic enough for 5***** but too good for 4**** so I gave it 5*****.

Well, at least the guy took care of the woman in the end and didn't drop her like a hot potato. All is well that ends well, or something like that, right? ;)

What a bastard!

She should have kicked him in the nuts and then divorced his ass. Who needs a pimp for a husband.

Love love love. Would have liked it to take a move bdsm turn but great none the less.