When You're Near Me

mesmerized

love it, you have a true flare for writing , the story is passionate and heart melting. hoping to read more - A

I ... I have no idea how many times I've read this story. I' m not in the remotest way certain, how many of those times I've actually reached the end. Whatever that number is, however, I can add a zero onto the end of it before my eyes are dry at the end of suffering this magnificence, and TWO zeroes onto the end of it, before I search for something to inspire me again to feel how glowy I'm now buzzing.

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This rules *so* much

I have read many stories here...this is the first time I commented..this is by far the absolute best written thoughtout story on the whole site..btavo...

D BEST

av neva read anything more superb dan dis. best story ever luv it . u d best .

Up for an Oscar?

What a wonderful love story this is. It would make a damned good film. No more to be said.

OMG!

The best ever!

Thank you!

L

Oh my

This is by far one of the best stories I have read on this site.

Absolutely loved your story and keep coming back to it and thinking about the characters. Well done! Oh and just had to find the song "When You're Near Me" loved that too.

wow

One of the best stories I've read. All of the elements of romance tied together so well. Only a couple grammatical errors, but otherwise a great piece to lose myself in.

Oscar...definitely

The person who said this should be made into a film was RIGHT. I started to cry when Jessie did, at the end. You illustrated their passion with your words so beautifully, and I could feel every electric touch of emotion. Very, very well done.

If you're looking for a LOVE STORY with "real" characters, a plot, theme, the works without the emphasis on sex, sex, and more sex - this is one. It is admirable and beautifully written. This was one of the first 10 stories I read on literotica and it helped endear me to this site in search of amazing stories like it. (I haven't been disappointed). Thank you StormyNight for sharing this gift with us. All the best.

Well Worth Reading

This NEEDS to be a movie! This is easily the best story on this site and is far better than many books I have read.

Thank You , StormyNite & Jessie

Beautiful

Absolutely beautiful. Enthralled from the first paragraph. With due respect to this wonderful site, this is a story which should get a wider audience. You should publish in an unrestricted form somewhere. Love story of the highest order.

anybody got some tissues?

Wow! Words can't explain how I'm really feeling right NOW! OMG! I guess I can say this is an AMAZING story. But that just doesn't cut it for me! I LOVED IT! I literally couldn't put my phone down. And I agree this needs to be a movie I would totally buy It! WOW THANK YOU! For writing this inspiring,encouraging, beautiful ,magnificent STORY! THANK YOU AGAIN!!!!!!!!!

Maybe...

one day I'll find my Jess or Ash.

Perfection!

This.. Is perfect. I love this so much. This is my third time reading this, and I still.. Seriously, takes my breath away. I would give this way more than 5 stars! Definitely my favorite story. It gives me a little hope that a love like this does exist.

It strikes through me....like a lightning.

MOVIE PLEASE
*ehem indie film producers*

You know the feeling when you finished reading a story then deep inside you're hoping for a sequel or an epilogue? Well, this is not that kind for me. In my opinion, this piece is the one in which you don't need to know further at the end, search for 'more', because it's perfect as it is..
I hope y'all are getting what I'm saying though. Sooo bad at expressing my thoughts clearly. :(

Hands down, StormyNite! We look forward to reading your masterpieces!

True romance

This is a wonderful story. It has believable characters with a great plot. Instead of the usual fall-into-bed-sex-sex-sex-by the second paragraph type of story usually seen on this site, this story has a slow careful build up of emotions. It is very well-crafted.

Damn!!!

I cried...... And I've read this for like five times already...... Definately a masterpiece!! Still crying

Lovely

I have read this so many times that I have lost count. Each and every reading brings out something different that I find fascinating. I make sure I have tissues at hand when I do read it as yes, I find myself crying, too, when I read it. To my mind it should be listed at the top of the genre listing.

Unimaginably beautiful ! I cried so many times. I read this work love and care in less time than I've read some of the other stories. It's so graceful, in its way you travel each one of the girls individual path to joy. As one of the many people that have shared this journey that you provided with your Incredible imagination. I want to thank you!!! 😍💏💖💕 5🌟's

good but rushed at the end

Very good romantic story ( not that erotic though) but d pace is not stable..Very smooth in d love section but not as good in passion..the passionate moments looks sudden..rushed..and not well described..it looks like a burden..otherwise very good story

I never comment on stories but this is the best one on this site for sure. I much prefer romantic stories and this was perfect in that regard. I could've read hundreds of pages about these two, so sweet and loving. Thank you for writing this

Wow what a beautiful story. Friendship, love, romance. You are a gifted writer.

Beautiful story.

Though I have read many stories on this site, some very well written, I have never been drawn into those stories like I have been with this one. The plot is top notch, it flows logically and naturally. You don't try to do too much with it, but you fill out the pages with enough content to keep us reading. You can feel the tension as you read the story, the buildup, the climax. The characters are solidly believable, well developed and not in the mold of the usual "shy coquette meets outgoing wild child" theme I have come to expect from most literotica stories. Though the focus, I feel, was more on the love between these two women, I feel the only complaint I can make is that the passionate moments were rushed. Despite that, I prefer plot over stories that are just about the sex. We have all read those stories here. If we could give more stars for a review, I would give this story many more than 5. Solid, good job. I look forward to more stories from you.

More

Loved the story. Read it more than 5 times.
Give us more please :-)

One of a few favourites of mine. Brilliant

Oh my god!

What a fantastic story! I loved the slow burn and build, and the last two pages or so had me in almost constant tears! thank you for sharing this story with us!