I too wondered if there was another story explaining who they were and why they had been separated, and another about what happened after, but this was good by itself. And I would have liked it if, after rubbing his cum over herself, she would have licked her hand, or scooped up some more and licked it, but it was hot the way it was. Don't complain so much!
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Anonymous06/04/09
wtf
what the fuck if you can't post a complete story then don't post at all NEVER post an excerpt ever again
OLDGUY45 must be getting senile he forgot he never wrote chapter one kind of makes you wonder what the webmasters actually do on this site if they allow this kind of crap to be posted
English
you should have fucked her
Great story but i would have let her rub it on her pussy then slip it in as i came.
women are made to be fucked.
nyc/guy
strange
so strange there was no begining to tell who they are and about thier lives before this point and no endding just the middle kind of ruins the story
Don't knock it!
I too wondered if there was another story explaining who they were and why they had been separated, and another about what happened after, but this was good by itself. And I would have liked it if, after rubbing his cum over herself, she would have licked her hand, or scooped up some more and licked it, but it was hot the way it was. Don't complain so much!
wtf
what the fuck if you can't post a complete story then don't post at all NEVER post an excerpt ever again
Chapter 2 and 3 and 4?
Excellent start, but where is the follow-up?
senile
OLDGUY45 must be getting senile he forgot he never wrote chapter one kind of makes you wonder what the webmasters actually do on this site if they allow this kind of crap to be posted
Excerpt
An Excerpt from Mirriam-Webster.com:
"Main Entry: 1ex·cerpt
1 : to select (a passage) for quoting : extract
2 : to take or publish extracts from (as a book)"
This is an erotica web site, but it's still (arguably) a literary site.
that had to smart
Witch Hazel in the vagina. That would have launched her through the roof.
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