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It was worth the wait!
Smoking hot story! Excellent story. And you may be a very lucky guy or talented story teller, but either way, this is just wicked hot! 10+
Please continue
but I fear three more years before the next chapter will leave you, the author, myself and the other readers dead and buried, or the firemen all retired and the slut wife whore in an old folks home with only "blazing" memories.
Three fucking years between chapters? Where you been? Iraq? Working for Halliburto?
nicely described sex scene
I would liked to have had Jim speak more respectfully to Daisy in front of her husband in the first chapter but, maybe I'm just a bit more of a romantic. LOL. The sex is a real turn on and I guess that's what it's all about. Well written story.
Awsome story
The first chapter was white hot smoking. The second was killer too. But why did it take you so long to write chapter two??? I didn't think i would ever get to finish reading about this tiny little sexy woman satisfying these two men. My suggestion is write a third chapter, and include more men, and some DP scenes. After all, a woman like daisy has to enjoy having two men inside her at once.
Delightful Cuckster - Your Ho Is Gone Little One
Never fails to amaze me when a writer who can write a great sex scene ruins it with a worthless wimp jacking off while watching a beeg cock ruins his wife whore's cunt for him forevermore. So why is that cuckster? Excite you beyond the norm? Then what?
Fantastic
You're an excellent writer -- I only wish that you had more submissions.
Excellent Buildup and Climax
Great, exciting writing!
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