All Comments on 'Sweetmeat'

to say, "It was just sex, honey!"

Nice job, Bob!

Regards, DJ

This story is only half finished. The woman has not suffered at all and the black man has only begun to suffer. Please write part 2 asap.

husband watch the wife get fuck and get mad.why did he watch and not do something.why is he mad,he let it happen.write the whole story about him watching and nothing what happen after the wife call,because he let her back home.

If YOUR WIFE brings a guy home to fuck in YOUR house, YOUR bed , YOUR MARRIGE, your wife has already decided that there is no marriage. There is nothing to fight for. She gave away what wasn't hers to give and in doing so ended the marriage at the point she sucked his cock the first time. She was more interested in a big dick than the Life and husband she swore to honor and cherish. Why fight for something that she had discarded before they ever came in the house? Everyone can be curious but when you are married (Monogamous marrige, non swingers) you give up the right to satisfy that curiosity when you say "I DO!".

Where have you been? He does this so many times -- all set up without any real payoff. It's almost a cliche with him.

I hope you're going to continue this tale. If you don't that would be a load of caca!

Landrious1 was right, what was there for him to stop. She brought the man to her house to satisfy her curiosity about the guy’s big dick. The husband just needed to see if she would go through with it. She did. Even if this turned out to be a one-time fling for her, the marriage was over.

hey Landrious1 you are wrong on one account:it is -still- hers to give .... but then she must face up to what she's done .. noone can tell a persom who to fuck or who not to - but of course there will be ,, I'd say a divorse

I would just change the locks ...

first, you would have found out that you just ate the cost of repair, for not going to their repair (insurance co ideal) place or getting multiple estimates.

Actually the bad luck has not ended, you have not gone to the doctor for treatment of your new STD.

I want Bob to write us a story where the slutwife bites off the guy's dick and makes the cuckolded wimp eat that sucker. I get so hard thinking about that.

Just ignore the unimaginative bozos who need it spelled out rather than using their imagination regarding the future. For Anonymous in USA: try to focus on the good writing in the story, not the insurance technicalities. Why should the husband need to check for STD? He had no contact with the slut after she got fucked by the black guy with multiple sex partner. 3521

Could have done a whole lot better like running the donks car into a police cruiser and left it (the one who wrote you up for the ticket), sent a nice bouquette of flowers to his boss' wife telling her she was giving it up or he was taking it and even hiring some bangers to haul the donkey dick to a gay bar to get some misuse he is so fond of. You got the elements, so meld them and build on them.

there was an opportunity here for much much more,

the wife's encounter with the mailroom,

the husband getting explicit revenge on the wife by aquiring a video of the mailroom event and letting her family have a copy,

really screwing her over on the divorce - currently he can't - no proof,

let your evil mind run with it

c'mon JPB, write an alternate ending

for Anonymous in USA - some insurance companies do all the leg work, you merely tell 'em the car is damaged and where it is, they pick it up and organise the rest.

(my insurance does)

My insurance even organise the rental for you and pick up all the towing and holding costs.

The story is not about insurance.

If you fuck someone else's wife, you had better be prepared to pay the price.

Boyd

1. I liked the story.

2. The poor man Mike, is now about to lose everything he has worked for just for one womans orfices.

3. wifey no longer has to worry aboutr blackmail.

4. None of the guilty parties has a real legal leg to stand on.

5. What more revenge do you need. The only time he should have interfered was when they were talking in the kitchen before the intercourse. After that the stock escped the open barn and Mike might have been to hard to beat in a fight, let alone the legal problems about defending your own home.

6. Let the husband enjoy the divorce, Mike enjoy crawling on the bottom for the next six months, and the wife enjoy dreading every mans insults or molestation.

...but like other of your stories it needs a part two. I do like them but you end them quick, I would love to see more happen to Marge and to see what happens to Mike.

yes it did cost him when you buy a hore,now what is it going to cost the hore...

in the US stolen credit cards will only cost you about $50 each. so if he went on a "spending spree" with his 3 credit cards, it only cost mike $150 - 3 cards x $50 limit - the rest of the "spree" is stolen from the credit card corp, not mike. and stealing from the credit card corp is punishing a third party for mike and his wife's tryst. not satisfying.

similarly most new cars has insurance against theft - so stealing mike's car will cause him trouble, but not a whole lot of $$. not terribly satisfying, ripping off the insurance corp for mike and his wife's cheating.

and there is a problem with the cops, he will probably be caught.

and what about "punishing" the cheating wife? squat here.

so this sad tale here is what happens to the hot headed husband:

loses his car (towed already);

loses his wife;

cops probably bust him for stealing the car or the cards, and then as a felon he gets squat from the wife;

and if the cops don't bust him, since hubby doesn't have evidence of their cheating (only his word), the divorce in the US courts will at best be 50/50, and probably a lot worse.

The husband should have snuck up on the guy and hit him over the headand then hit him in the nuts that would make his day.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

If this were a real situation then the husband should have went and found his shotgun. Assuming the little wimp Bob had one, or perhaps he was too much of a ultra liberal bleeping heart to have a gun around. He evidently wasn't a fighter, besides being not much of a man to let a nigger, (Not a black man mind you, but a nigger. Niggers act like the nigger in the story. Black men act like men who happen to have black skin or some variety of light to dark brown to black.) treat his wife like he did.

Next the woosey will have to get in line behind all the niggers in the mailroom to have sex with his wife...that is if he can even feel the sides of her stretched out cunt.

Commenter who said that a person is only liable for fifty dollars for each credit card the wimp maxed out. Insurance will replace his car so the wimp actually let a nigger fuck his wife for $550.00. Thats a pretty good price for a dumb ass whore. Showes where the wimps brains were...up his ass...

focus on low class women with no morals or ethics. I guess the day time talk shows on TV ingrain people to these types of mental attitude. Divorce the bitch, come out at the trial she was fucking a man who was one she professed to hate. Make it public information. You are divorcing her why try to hide why? The guy who mentioned the credit cards only being worth $50 each was right and you stand a good chance of getting arrested for using the cards, that isnt revenge it is stupid. Want to inflict damage put sugar into his gas tank, shove a potato up his exhaust pipe with a broom handle, do something that will cost money, rip out the wiring in his engine, put sand in the filler cap of his oil. The wife isnt worth time, except for keeping her from getting any more money that she absolutely has to. Run up your joint credit cards creat debts she is also responsible for. Sell the house at a loss. Take time to think instead of being used as a source of providing a safe base for her operations. It is surprising how little most of these stories say of intelligence in the way of the husband.

To the Anonymous who wrote "For Anonymous in USA: try to focus on the good writing in the story, not the insurance technicalities." It is the details that often create plausibility, that allow the reader to suspend disbelief. Sometimes, the wrongness of detail is obvious such as Phoenix having a snow storm (assuming the story isn't science fiction). Other times it's not as blatant, but still enough to affect many readers such as the point about monetary responsibility of a stolen credit card. Hopefully, most people with credit cards know the extent of their liability in case of fraud or theft and knowing that, the character's revenge immediately strikes them as odd and detracts the author's intention. Similarly, those of us who have had cars stolen (twice now, once from the parking lot of a mall in broad daylight) or have friends or family who've experienced the same are familiar with the response of insurance companies in such an event.

As others have suggested, sabotage like putting bleach in the crankcase (contrary to rumor, sugar in the gas tank does little because it doesn't dissolve in gasoline and the filters usually catch what grains do go through the fuel line) or draining the transmission fluid, things usually not covered by insurance, would be a better revenge and the penalty if caught is much less than grand theft. A better revenge is if the fellow can be sued by the husband with the lawyer accepting a contingency fee since the defendant will be paying out-of-pocket.

You were wandering if the bitch would dare to come home? Since you didn't bring the story to your conclusion, allow me to finish it for you.

If this will be a typical JPB story, you'll have a little hissy fit, rant and rave for a couple of paragraphs, show the world what a real man you are, and then in the last sentence, you'll forgive her and live together happily ever after (or at least until she does it to you again, and then forgive her all over again...).

where is chapter 2

wife has some serious thinking to do, notably, wjat to do?; and mike!insurance aside, how does he explain that to a significant(?) other?

she screwed herself, and it does not stop there. he has a problem, and maybe more.

the rating is for the ending. a defacto legal separation where wife can't really say a whole lot. he should not bend or fold, and let her screw anyone, anytime she wants. he can be much happier, and when he said that to her, nice direct way to get the point to her.

Say no more. Dockwatcher.

Class of what, the date a puta graduated cheatin school? If so that's at age between 13 n 15. Good ole Bob ain't a male you stupidos, he's a she. Ifn ya cain't read that inta her stories you're idiots. Get over yourself, move forward and get a life carryin night soil.

whatever, this in toto is a damned good story cause what the hell else is a male allowed to do these days?

the slut out is good. I dont have a problem with it. But then I am not a little boy worried about looking tough. I am not one to the a slut back in the house for any reason.

I have a fondness for the long knive, swords, Katana, and I would prefer that hubby go into the bedroom and give his wife a gift of mikes cock, cut right from his torso. Then just for fun, take off his hands and take away his lively hood. Acouple of neckties to staunch the blood from his arms and a hot iron to cauterize his stump. Overall a good start to revenge, oh yes and the wife just has to watch.

I can't believe you actually put a great ending on one of your stories. Will there be any others that actually have a decent ending???????????

The answer to the husband's dilemna is this:

As soon as wifey was naked and black dude had his pants around his knees, he appears. Wife had done his dishonor, yest, but Michael has blue balls, isn't able to fight, and hasn't penetrated wifey yet.

A few cell phone pictures for the family of their little girl on her knees in front of Michael and it's the family Christmas Card.

And there are no 11 inch cocks so I gave it 1*

now what will they do. TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent JPB perverse story otherwise , being childfree would have enabled a clean " sweetmeat-free " permanent break .

She cheated. He caught her. NOW WHAT???

Why are your opinions so often counter factual? Go to Google. Click images. Type 11 inch cock. You now have evidence that there are 11 inch cocks.

She is a cheater and he is an idiot. He doesn't break up the tryst and try to save his marriage. Instead, he watches his wife have sex with the BBC while his life goes in the shitter. He will give up at least half of everything he owns and will probably only get to see his kid a few days a month. If he stops the sex before it starts what are the chances of saving his marriage, 50/50? If the moron watches and listens to his wife cheat what are his chances of having a nice life in the near future?

you always have a gun hidden where you can get it. I have four all in different places.

Obvious Hubby doesn't have a cell-phone - Sweetie didn't try to call that, and he could have called his office sooner. The cells at that time generally had decent digital cameras. With one, Hubby could have gotten stills downstairs that might have helped prove things.

As has been stated, there was nothing left to save when she invited the guy in the house after flirting, and for sure when she allowed and returned the kiss. Let her have her fun and collect enough data to reduce the economic pain before the confrontation. It might be cute to start her worrying that same afternoon, but it is poor strategy! Careful planning is less exciting than precipitous action, but much more productive.

4*

Its well written but then JPB was anything but a bad writer. The problem for me lies in the fact that he watched her cheat but did not do anything to stop her. Why would any man do that? Kind of wimpish....

The husband cannot protect and police his wife 24/7, he has to trust her. It is better that he just listened and found out she can't be trusted. Good flash story. Thank You.

Several commentors questioned why he didn't step in and stop her?

HE Wrote the answer to that right up front - she had already betrayed his confidence, was a devote racist and the guy was obviously quite comfortable and certain that he was going to screw the wife so...he Stated, might as well find out how bad, know everything for sure and he, as much as wrote, they were through!

Trust, verify and then decide what to do - With Conviction!

Thanks Bob!

I agree with the last comment. He didn't care to stop her because as soon as he saw her with her new lover he knew the marriage was over. So he made the best of it. Now she can fuck all the guys at work without worrying about cheating. A skank is born.

I had to laugh at how Hubby fucked over Asshole. Spent his cash, maxed his credit cards, and stole his car. Hat Trick! Made Asshole pay for fucking Wifey.

Made Wifey scared as hell to come home? Priceless!

5 HUGE Stars!

he spent some of Mike's money on a large-magazine concealed carry weapon for future protection.

Sucks that he didn't have a camera, would have been nice to send her family some pictures, or threaten to.

It would not make a difference in court, unless he could use pictures as leverage (the term blackmail is too harsh)

Theft insurance on the car ?

Maybe, if it was new, but if it was older he might have liability only - just enough to keep plates on it and keep from being ticketed for no insurance.

Then it is his loss.

straight forward, seemingly niave idea of what she was tempting with would get out of hand. hubby should consider shooting off assholes cock and balls so he doesn't ruin someone else's marriage.

and the endings too. TK U MLJ LV NV

great flash tale. Five stars.

all the things he called the writer his mother called him last night. Dear annony. Grow up you sad little boy gave it a 5

Just 3*, even if it was a good story and well writen, but he didn't took any photo to send to her racist parents and family...To send to their bosses...To put in the NET...And what did he do to save his money?

quick, and semi clean. no cell phone pics, no karate moves, no blasting away at both of them, almost like it was real story. the story could continue, but what's the point. even if he had cuckold fantasies, which we don't know. why would he want to house and take care of a slut, and all the black bastards, ruin his future, probably his bank account too. lets face it, from time to time some people have had a one off, either by accident, or happenstance, and usually their marriage survived. this was a planned attack to get his cock. she just didn't understand the black mind.

Just because he didn't care anymore is no reason to let them get away with what thet were doing.

As soon as they headed for the bedroom he should have grabbed a hammer and smashed Mike's skull in after getting some cell videos, and telling her that she was going to back him up on his "defending her from rape story" or the videos would go public. With her racist background she would agree to ANYTHING to keep those videos from getting out!

I would like to see (and read) about him opening the can of whoop ass on his wife and her lover but this is all we'll get from JPB on this one.

but not delivered. Unfortunately, due to what was and was not written, I can only see one ending for this story.

Mike severely disrespected the husband in his own bed, even more so than Marge did. However, he will basically get off with a little inconvenience over the credit cards and the car theft. On the up side for him, he will be able to pork Marge whenever he wants since she will no longer have a husband.

Marge will get half of the assets. Even if it made a difference, hubby cannot sue for adultery since he has no proof. If they have a kid, she will get child support, keep the house until the kid turns 18 and may even get some kind of alimony if hubby makes a lot more than she does. For her part, the only justice will be that she loses the husband she claims to love.

All of this is very unsatisfying. It would have been better if Bob had spent a bit more time working on some payback. I don't advocate violence that leaves permanent damage, although wasting Mike's gonads would not have been disagreeable. However, there should have been something done to Mike to make him regret his actions.

... In a positive way JPB... Anything I've read from you or should I say tried reading was pure cuckold sissy bullshit whereas here the guy finally grows some balls to confront the cheating cunt, I still think there is space for another part, sort of like revenge on both wife and her lover, come on BOB, challenge yourself, do the right thing no sissy reconciliation or therapy, burn the bitch, this story needs a proper ending

Read it again. At the end I could read the cheating cunts thoughts. "Oh God the one time I bring a cock home he had to be there. I should have went to the hotel."

Fucking cunt.

Hiding and watching isn't growing some balls! Lol

Any time I stand and watch some guy fuck my wife in my home is the day they'll stick me in the ground.

to get the story out to provide us with some closure. A waste of time and effort to read. A 3*, if that.

Stop writing! This sucked and was unfinished!

In so many stories, the guy with the dick messes up the marriage and gets away at no cost to him. I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that the husband saw to it that Mike lost his car, and that hubby went on a spending spree with jerkoff's credit cards and cash. But hubby shouldn't be through with the two rutting animals. Mike should expect a complete backalley penectomy.

He should have skipped using the credit cards as that opens him up to charges, but the rest was pretty funny. Sweetmeat huh?

You're not that that much of a racist , or a nigger hate, are you?

I don't know which is funnier, the story or some of the asinine comments left by people whose brain is not fully functional.

Why stop cell phone pictures etc

He tried to humiliate him to his wife no payback sufficient

If you added another chapter where the wife pleads forgiveness but he throws her out pregnant with Mikes baby in her womb. Anyway why was she surprised that she had been found out after Mike found his keys and wallet and car gone?

He should then arrange some payback for Mike. However, a good read but in real life he would have confronted them in the house.

I think most men would have broke them up at the couch and used a baseball bat, before listening to all the crap let alone allowing the sex

I see her divorced and him moving on

I especially liked this: "I drove his car down to the car rental place and left it parked on the street with the windows rolled down and the keys in the ignition. It sat there and fairly screamed out TAKE ME!" That's a new bit of revenge and I really like the idea!

Yeah! Almost a good story but it wasn’t finished!!!

He should have taken pictures and audio & video. Then he could have gone after her company and had Mike fired. Also it would be nice ammunition in the divorce. Can you imagine what her racist family would do?

... 'Cause, being him, I would say a truly heartfelt 'thanks' to the Good Lord for finally cluing me in that I've wasted more than a decade on a worthless slut.

Make no mistake: this ain't the first time Marge cheated on her marriage. She may have never had sex with a black man before, and maybe she never brought another man in her house, in her marital bed, before, but there's absolutely no way she was faithful throughout her eleven years in this union. She felt way too easily to her would-be suitor here to think that this was a first time event for her. Plus, faithful wives do not bring male co-workers in her home to check up on their home computer problems - they ask their husbands to deal with it.

In any case, the payback for that affront doesn't seem worth the trouble - sure, he made Mike's life a little bit inconvenient, but Marge seems to walk away from the whole thing unhurt. Sure, she's going to get a divorce, but that's gonna hurt the MC just as much, if not more, as it's going to hurt her. Worst still, is that the stunt he pulled on the man who cucked him may come back to bite him in the ass - taking the wallet, the car, the money, none of it can really get back to him, since there was no concrete proof he was behind it... maxing out the credit cards, however, will definitely land him in jail, unless all of the shops he went to during his shopping spree had no security cams in them. Since that's incredibly unlikely... going to jail for a cheating wife just ain't worth it.

Good story, though. I don't mind the none-ending, since it's pretty clear that the marriage is dead. Not the greatest BTB, but still a decent one.

you are the best at short and sweet!!!

Need more of an ending with more payback. Oh well could have been a good story.

No pain no gain

Hope a little "white meat" was worth the cost. I'm thinking . . .NO!

Hubby is a pussy

If Papatoad wrote this he would probably leave out perfunctory bullshit sex out and would have made no conversations and it would have all been 10 times better than JPB can do. Not bad though.

Needs more of an ending! More revenge, too! Hubby was a definite cuck!

Too short. Feels unfinished

Mike needed a lot worse of an ending than that. His pride and joy could use a little TLC.

Hey look there's that dark donut complaining again. Q

Stories based on the BBC myth are an automatic 1.

Have to agree with donuts on this.one. Big dark dildo bullshit.

Needs a better ending,eg did she come home.?

That was truly a fecal matter redefining story.

Where is the ending.....

Fuck Bob at least complete this.

Don't be a Wimp.

Only halfway to a story.

Yep, like the commenter below, the BBC myth gets an automatic 1

Another story with a candy ass character.

This story IS unfinished.

Did Mike fix her computer, or not?

The stupid asshole stood there and watched. HE DESERVED EVERYTHING HE GOT.

The wimp stppd amd watched it all. He deserved everything he god. At least have the balls to put a stop to it. You can still kick her out if you want to. Is her lover bigger than you? So what? That's the reason you keep a baseball bat and a shotgun in the house. Bob, I used to like you, but you are leaving too many stories unfinished.

No man would watch and not take a bat and put it up mikes ass

He saw the whole things happening and did nothing. Why doesn't somebody just kill hkim and put him out of his misewry? Bob, I just lost a losst of respect for your writing. I hate stores about men like this who don't have the balls to even try to stop his wife from cheating. I would like to give this -10*.

If you had not added the fact that her boss was/is black it would have been a 4*, now it is a 5*. She needs to be seen as a BBC lover, before the divorce.

That is one stupid cuckold! Not even smart enough to take video or pictures, he will get screwed in divorce court. But not even try to stop Mike or beat his ass, what looser. It’s no wonder Marge went looking for better and bigger cock..

JPB often has stories that make for good reading.

This one in particular didn't show up the same way.

The betrayed husband watches or hears his wife being another man's bitch and just leaves to cause material damage to the bitch's lover.

I agree that something more "tough" should have been imposed. At least video or audio recording, to have a good negotiation argument.

The bitch should have been burned, along with the asshole.

But that's just my opinion.