All Comments on 'Our Little Secret'

keep it coming you have a great story there next time try adding a mature women with some younger women it will spice it up.

Very hot story and like one other comment, an older, mature woman with a hairy pussy would add to the excitement

for the two younger women. I do like what you have written too.

how about a sequel and next time including the cleaning woman - a mature dark-haired latina, innocent in such matters, with large full breasts and hairy private area.

mabe some older women mabe a techer or a older sister and more there own age. Very erotic 5 star

THANK YOU ALL FOR READING!!!!!

This was a difficult write for me, i personally have never had any lesbien experiences(because i'm male). I wrote it because of demand of friends who enjoyed my first story "One to Remember" (male/female), although the two are not related as far as story line, i continued with the theme for "first time".

I also want to thank all of you for commenting on the story, although it is giving me a big head. I also want to thank you for the advice. I like the idea of an older woman being involved, however i am turned off by a lot of hair, therefore (unofficial announcement)in my next lesbien story i will compromise with you by adding an older woman without alot of hair.

Keep the comments coming, i enjoy reading your reactions. and i like to know that my stories get people hot.

THANKS AGAIN,

Your Friendly Neighborhood MonkeyMan

hang on... you are NOT A WOMAN?! where did you learn to write like that?! Your story is simply awesome. I am honestly very, very impressed. Mew

I'm also impressed at the way you wrote this. I really thought it was written by a woman. Well done! I love shower stories.

This was not really a sexual type of story. But keep trying.

... not "l-e-s-b-i-E-n" as the self-described gamer who made up this fantasy would have it. It's obvious a man put this together, given how mechanically-written it is. But the author hasn't had anything published on Lit in ten years. Let's see if he's any better now. He may have less hair on his own head and appreciate more hair on a woman's delta than he says he did when last he got into print.

" It's obvious a man put this together"

Careful by your logic certain things should be done by men and other things by women. Therefore, gender roles are needed. Right?