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Well Worth the Wait!
I'm at a complete loss for words here really - I loved the storyline, loved the dialogue, loved the outcome. This is my favourite one yet, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future!
Jennifer
Breathtaking!
I would have to agree with Jenn and say this is your best story thus far. Your descriptiveness, your character development, and your ability to create a relatable situation is amazing! I loved that you threw in the interaction between the brothers, and of course your interaction between the main characters was great! I can only hope there will be a part 2! Hugs hun
Oh My God
This is superb, just superb. The writing flows rythmically, ebbing and flowing and engrossing the reader. The use of dialogue is spot on and beautifully descriptive. Off to read more of your stories. Bravo Hocky, Bravo
Very Nice Story!
I loved the dating service angle you went in. It was very sweet. I loved the developement of the characters and the way you wrote them. Very Hot Stuff!!!!!
Very Nice "Erotic Coupling" story
NOT a "Romance" story, lose a star 4*'s
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