All Comments on 'Kindling Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
i want some of those chips!

I know this is your classic 'chemical in the air' fantasy and I just loved sharing it. I wanted to shag Sharon by the end of the story too. I know I have to go from bi-curious to all-out bi shag-fest...now where can i buy those chips and seduce my sexy, big-busted neighbour?

RootOfTheStoryRootOfTheStoryover 4 years ago
Quick and Sly

A great blend of information, build up, and subtlety. Not too much is said outright, but the implications of Hazel's gift allow the imagination to run free outside the confines of the story. Quick, sexy and layered. Looking forward to more.

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