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Keep upt the good work
This chapter is fantastic. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!!!!
Great
Continue the great story.
Wow, wonderful!
Hot, keep these coming, I'd love to see them experiement with some things, I love Drow and elves, and you mix em up you have something really good!
this is really good!
i really liked this story, and your other one too, keep writing!!!
wonderful so far
i want to know what happens next..do they end up free ,safe, together and happy?please write more soon...
Wonderful Story
You do have a flair for writing. Nice characer development. Wonderful love story.
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