Frauleins Fucked

it was a decent piece of fiction

i enjoyed the story pretty well but didnt like all the outragous number of kids or the mind control. though, it does make me laugh nearly every negitive post on this site is all anonymous. but, dont get me wrong jim i really enjoy your writing style.

Meh

Not one of your best stories. I liked it though because the angle was unique. It's hard to write a new story these days.

I'll leave all the bombasting to others even though they only have half a clue what they're talking about.
That's really irrelevent though in the context of a work of FICTION with a FICTIONAL protagonist and FICTIONAL victims.

nice

you have to continue this story maybe he will get to know one of his german daughters

Two Better Than One

Two frauliens are so much better than one, and isn' t revenge sweet?

no

Painfully racist

boring

and made me puke. why bring politics into sex?

why

Why do you have to bring old hatreds into this? And even so, why teach his American daughters to hate - anyone at all? Why the destruction of property? Why the anal brutality, why waste his potent essence in their bums?

Arrogance

Loved it. Most Germans are still arrogant. Fuck em!!!!!!!!!!

I wanted to see them enjoy it, not get raped!

German Girls

If true, I wish you could make monthly trips to Germany and impregnate thousands of those relatives of the bastards who tried to destroy our brothers and sisters.

political hatred

He is as bad as the Nazi's. They were anti-semitic, he is anti-germanic. Even though it has been over a generation since that war. Even though most Germans, though still proud of their ancient heritage, feel the stains of Hitler's reich. Unlike Americans, they walk the streets of their cities and towns and still can see where houses and businesses have had to rebuild after the bombings. Hitler's bunkers, rocket factories, anlantic wall. The remains are still there. Think all they did was persecute Jews? Hitler took everything from the German people to fuel the war on the eastern front with Russia. He was up against a man as insane as himself in a vast country so far away that he couldn't get supplies and reinforcements to the troops fighting battles he ultimately couldn't win Thank God. But your character is spewing the same hatreds 70+ years later. Be careful what you write. People will fall for the printed word whether it is true or not. They will believe it. I don't like this. Your character wasn't part of the War. His parents escaped it and didn't discuss it with him till later in life. It is old history that shouldn't be repeated. And he is teaching innocent little girls, his daughters, to hate all things German also.

Trash

This is just as xenophobic and twisted as any garbage spoken by a Neo Nazi. Rape and forced impregnation is deplorable under any circumstances, and I find it sickening that anyone would write garbage like this.

Mercedes Benz

Twice during my times of younger days I lived in Miami. Plus residing in Jewish communities various times. I always wondered why Jews purchased a Mercedes auto, especially knowing they were murdered by Germans. That question still tops my list of unanswered thoughts about people and their ability to keep some things hidden from their sharp minds. I also found time to give a couple of Jewish girls a fat tummy. Such is life when I read this story and find it matches my own thoughts about a certain part of the human race.

Phallus

I liked your work until I read this. Any attempt to get entertained by references to the Holocaust is the work of a stupid mind. The main character written here who reminds another generation of Germans that their grandparents did these things is just wrong. They'll not be allowed to really forget, anyway. The monuments to the National Socialist Movement are still there, all over the country. But we don't have to write stories that make it sound ok to keep persecuting them. And your Jewish character is just as bad, in his own way, as the stupid old men who perpetrated these crimes to begin with. This is not about sex, erotica, mind control, or even race. This is simply about hate.