Very good, i love incest stories and so does my Daddy. giggle. Am glad it all worked out. Please keep writing. Will look forward to more stories from you.
by
Anonymous11/22/06
Is there going to be a third?
Really nice. I enjoyed the first story in this series as well.
by
Anonymous02/07/07
We need a no:3
Well interesting i want a S>A>M
We need NO:3, 1 was good i dont know what the other idiots said but your tales are good
by
Anonymous08/04/07
S.A.M. mkes Me Spread
Hey guys, this story made me spread my cunt lips and cum like crazy. Loved the ejaculation episodes. I only wish it were me lying there on that table.
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Anonymous11/20/07
Very Nice alternative (?) take on Incest!
The Incest theme is GR8, but adding a machine is really interesting, 2! Bizarre, really. I can see what it offers the girls, but why would the Daddy want his machine 2 have the fun 4 HIM? EH? I Do not get THAT part. Oh, yes. He's a Scientist. Duh. Well @ least his babies R agreeable 2 the whole procedure! Nice of them 2 go along with it, Huh? Great stories, Can we have More, please, please? PLEASE!
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Anonymous03/09/08
fantasic, but quite fake
after 10 minutesm both sisters didnt mind about being fucked by their own dad. strange much?!!?
hey... how about some more... like while their pregnant?
by
Anonymous03/22/12
definitely more
Does he sell any?
How about a story about someone who buys it?
by
Anonymous10/13/12
I want more!
Give me more more more!!!! If S.A.M. was real, I'd definitely be using it every single day. Just reading the story gets me hot and horny.
by
Anonymous12/21/12
Ummmm...
Wtf did i just read? Wierdest.Story.Ever.
by
Anonymous10/04/13
amazing
give me MORE if i could I WOULD SO USE S.A.M
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Anonymous07/17/14
Loving Daddy
I love these stories hope to find more of them
by
Anonymous06/05/16
Lame
Both of them. Lacking.
by
Anonymous12/10/16
hollow
Can't quite put my finger on it, but this lacks something to "flest out" the story line. It was too easy, for one thing. For another, it amounts to rape. The father mounts his eldest daughter with her blindfolded, gagged, and restrained. And at the same time she is incredibly sexually frustrated, which would probably rob her of the ability to say "no" to whomever was on top of her. I like the concept, but the details - no. A machine that purposly is programmed to sexual frustration? He has actually entertained the idea of how happy this will make a cruel dictator? All in a sudden moment, while on the table, each girl just automatically falls in love with "Daddy" and wants to bear his children all her life until she is used up? I don't like pregnancy fetishes anyway, very much. There has to be more to sex than breeding. Women are not just broodmares.
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Anonymous01/28/17
I'm sorry but
The stories just don't cut it. You write surprisingly well for this site, but the stories just don't work. Nothing about the stories rings right and then you took this story anal with nothing up front to let the reader know you would head in that direction. Piss pore way to treat your readers. And that ruined everything for me. I didn't bother to finish the second story. No vote no nothing on this one.
The old fart
English
loved it
Very good, i love incest stories and so does my Daddy. giggle. Am glad it all worked out. Please keep writing. Will look forward to more stories from you.
Is there going to be a third?
Really nice. I enjoyed the first story in this series as well.
We need a no:3
Well interesting i want a S>A>M
We need NO:3, 1 was good i dont know what the other idiots said but your tales are good
S.A.M. mkes Me Spread
Hey guys, this story made me spread my cunt lips and cum like crazy. Loved the ejaculation episodes. I only wish it were me lying there on that table.
Very Nice alternative (?) take on Incest!
The Incest theme is GR8, but adding a machine is really interesting, 2! Bizarre, really. I can see what it offers the girls, but why would the Daddy want his machine 2 have the fun 4 HIM? EH? I Do not get THAT part. Oh, yes. He's a Scientist. Duh. Well @ least his babies R agreeable 2 the whole procedure! Nice of them 2 go along with it, Huh? Great stories, Can we have More, please, please? PLEASE!
fantasic, but quite fake
after 10 minutesm both sisters didnt mind about being fucked by their own dad. strange much?!!?
really nice
Pretty nice. Very well written, good story. Hope we can hear more :)
more
hey... how about some more... like while their pregnant?
definitely more
Does he sell any?
How about a story about someone who buys it?
I want more!
Give me more more more!!!! If S.A.M. was real, I'd definitely be using it every single day. Just reading the story gets me hot and horny.
Ummmm...
Wtf did i just read? Wierdest.Story.Ever.
amazing
give me MORE if i could I WOULD SO USE S.A.M
Loving Daddy
I love these stories hope to find more of them
Lame
Both of them. Lacking.
hollow
Can't quite put my finger on it, but this lacks something to "flest out" the story line. It was too easy, for one thing. For another, it amounts to rape. The father mounts his eldest daughter with her blindfolded, gagged, and restrained. And at the same time she is incredibly sexually frustrated, which would probably rob her of the ability to say "no" to whomever was on top of her. I like the concept, but the details - no. A machine that purposly is programmed to sexual frustration? He has actually entertained the idea of how happy this will make a cruel dictator? All in a sudden moment, while on the table, each girl just automatically falls in love with "Daddy" and wants to bear his children all her life until she is used up? I don't like pregnancy fetishes anyway, very much. There has to be more to sex than breeding. Women are not just broodmares.
I'm sorry but
The stories just don't cut it. You write surprisingly well for this site, but the stories just don't work. Nothing about the stories rings right and then you took this story anal with nothing up front to let the reader know you would head in that direction. Piss pore way to treat your readers. And that ruined everything for me. I didn't bother to finish the second story. No vote no nothing on this one.
The old fart
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