All Comments on 'Car Ride'

by rachelbagel067

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claretwineclaretwinealmost 18 years ago
Good but Short...

Nice job Rachel but I wish you would have let the story build more before you mounted him. When you did, however, it was hot, really hot. I imagined my own cock filling your steaming pussy. Keep it up!

vanillarodvanillarodalmost 18 years ago
good for what it is

I agree: good story but really short. It's a hot little snippet, but I'd like to see more about the characters, more detail on the sex, and maybe more episodes. It's a long drive, I assume ... what else do they do?

Anyway, a very good start, but not satisfying -- you left me wanting more!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 17 years ago
Nice quick fantasy!

Good job--nice and quick--great!

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