by rachelbagel067
Nice job Rachel but I wish you would have let the story build more before you mounted him. When you did, however, it was hot, really hot. I imagined my own cock filling your steaming pussy. Keep it up!
I agree: good story but really short. It's a hot little snippet, but I'd like to see more about the characters, more detail on the sex, and maybe more episodes. It's a long drive, I assume ... what else do they do?
Anyway, a very good start, but not satisfying -- you left me wanting more!