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Girlfriend Likes To Dance

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/09/06

Ouch.

See. No good deed goes unpunished.

This had to hurt but better to find out about it now before you had invested any more time or (God forbid) married her.

The proper response to an improper action. Well done.

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by Bazzz08/09/06

Well Written

A very sexy premise. That girl was never going to deny that big black stud. Too bad the boyfriend was too jealous to stay with his woman. I am sure somethig could have been worked out after his anger subsided and the fact that he was as hard as a rock watching his girl take a big black dick was discussed between them. still a very good job.

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by Anonymous08/11/06

Two tips:

1. Edit.
2. Proof-read.

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by Anonymous12/22/06

Nice

Glad that it wasn't another cuckold story, interesting premise but not terribly exciting. Give it a C+

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by Anonymous07/21/07

Enjoyed it

very good read, i'm glad that it didn't end with the guy being a whimpering puppy.

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by Anonymous11/12/08

Hot, but .......

why on earth would you tell people about this? Sure, i got a hard on reading it, but i couldn`t, wouldn`t, want people to know . I feel really sorry for you matey

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by Anonymous11/12/08

A few glaring errors

A few glaring errors in spelling (to instead of too and composer instead of composure!) hurt a little, but it was still a good believable tale. As for the commenter who preceeded me that couldn't understand why the author would tell others about this; Why wouldn't the guy tell what happened? It's not like he's putting his name and address on the story or something. Nobody knows who they really are except the participants, so just sit back and enjoy the stories.

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by Anonymous06/08/09

She wasnt a girlfriend she was a fuck toy dating

around. You dont fuck used pieces of community trash. Let her enjoy her motherhood and the welfare nation.

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by Anonymous09/28/09

WAY TO STAND UP FOR YOURSELF

Glad you walked out and left her. I would have too. You made the right decision. now keep on respecting yourself.
She wasn't worth anymore of your time. You can do better.

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by Anonymous06/11/10

wow!!!

very hot story!! hot interracial lust!! sounds like a black baby on the way!!

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by Anonymous06/15/10

good interracial story!!

the black guy banged her right in the club. you can bet the baby is gonna be black!!! another pretty white girl blackbred !!! happens all the time !!! many white girls love the black dick. they can not overcome the jungle fever!!!

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by Anonymous10/08/11

fucking A!

"Finally, a man knows how to handle a cheating bitch. If it was a story, you told it well and it had the correct ending. That is how a man should handle a woman who would act like that. Not that his girl fucking someone is bad but she did it behind his back and he didn't stand for it.
Way to go.

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by Anonymous09/01/12

Comments regarding spelling and grammar

Seriously, I don’t think many people care if there are spelling/grammar mistakes. It’s a damn sex story…

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by Anonymous12/03/12

@ Bazzz

No, it wouldn't have worked out for the better. The girlfriend is a bitch who likes to party hard and was shown the end results of her actions. Serves her right.
Things might have worked out if she had been more open and truthful about it. Both storiemax and his gf seemed to really care for each other, but she obviously couldn't be trusted and it seemed she cared more for dancing, partying, and big black guys than him, so it wouldn't have worked if she wasn't willing to commit, which I doubt she would.

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by auhunter0408/05/15

IF

If you don't dance with your girl somebody will

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by HungryWolf2702/08/16

I love watching my girlfriend dancing dirty with other guys when we went out.

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