an excellent mystical poem (~_~) a very nice write blue!
I particularly enjoyed the first grouping. Some lovely imagery there, blue :)
I like it, especially the first part.The second is perhaps weakened by too many 'ing verbs, 6 I think. Splendorous? - not sure whether that word works but that's probably me.
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