All Comments on 'Cruise to Alaska Day 02'

An interesting mix; believable and sensitive enough but arousing. Obviously begs for more and an explanation of why that was the last night (the 'Danish' officer?)

I got to admit that with one line you elevated this story for me from a simple sexcapade into something with a little more emotional edge: That being we, the reader, are foreshadowed that this tryst is not destined to last and the girl will leave the protagonist soon enough for a younger buck.

Very well written and enjoyable.

take me with you on a cruise -