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Great Story
You know someones going to mention that Henry had been married 24 years and the oldest child was dentist and second was a medical resident. Probably you should add six years of marriage to account for their schooling.
Boyd
Hey Celt
Loved the story. It is great to see the good guy come out on top.
I do see one loose end in the story however. You didn't resolve the reason for the change in sexual behavior for the wife. You brought it up as the reason he was suspicious in the first place and then just left us hanging on it.
Otherwise I thought it was a great tale.
Charleybear
Geesh Louise, two good ones by you today
Not saying you don't write good ones, but two posted on the same day? Normally your spread out a little more =)
I echo Charley's question about the new sex, but other than that, I liked it when someone comes out on top and it's not because they have to give up something to do it.
Great piece here.
-Risq
Fun read and a little mystery made it that way
That was great and I am looking forward to the next installment or this couple and their detective agency.
Well done and fun reading.
Thank you
PT
The sex WAS explained....
And I quote:
"But, it could also be a sign that she's just doing some soul searching and trying to decide how she wants the rest of your lives to be. Remember, she lost her children now and she feels totally alone. You may be surprised at what we find."
Now, thick as I occasionally am, I am quite satisfied with that explanation, and it fits perfectly with her also deciding to finish school. Where's the problem?
Looks like this will be a good series - if there are to be more.
A really good enjoyable story!!!
I'm no different than the people in the story---I was happy to see that she wasn't cheating!!
I just love happy endings!!
I believe this is my first TTS story.
Interesting, but not really Humor or Satire. Second paragraph = the word "swarthy." I love it. Why, you ask? (You'll be sorry you asked.) Reference the movie "Body Heat," starring Kathleen Turner, William Hurt, and Richard Crenna. Crenna is talking to Hurt about first meeting his (Crenna's) wife. "She was with this swarthy-looking guy." You'll know you are watching the original version if you hear that line. Later versions were dubbed with a more PC term. Not being very PC, I notice things like that.
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