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1st submission and well done first true love
Very well done first submission of romance in progression.
I loved your description of the feelings going through our young man. He is living the feeling of knowing his heart is attached to her every word and movement and it’s way of taking over all his thoughts for the first time. He has found for the first time his wants are second to someone else’s.
What he has found is real love for the first time.
He states a fact he has discovered that intimacy is so much better then just sex after the initial lust has been completed.
EXCERPT: I never understood people who enjoyed one night stands, or random drunken making out sessions. Physical intimacy is never good until you know the other person. When you both know the other's likes, dislikes, and habits, that's when it becomes amazing.
What he couldn’t know, is that as years are added the love and intimacy grow to proportions of the two really becoming one. All their thoughts and actions will make them know the other is always their and that’s all that’s worthwhile to them. They hopefully will find the outside world says their names as if it was one person as they are made part of someone else’s conversation.
I liked your first submission and the youthfulness of the Characters, as it is their first true love. Those first real loves are always very special, and for some lucky ones they are the last true love they will need.
Thank you for the entertainment and please keep writing.
PT
Beautiful!
You have described making love....
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