This story was lacking in detail and juice of the "incest-taboo" group of stories. The relationship with Capucine is just as juicey and arousing as the encounter with Binne. The punch line removed the conflict and gaave awesome resolution to the tension which had built the story to its present level of engagement. My compliments to the author.
regards, goldenalbert
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The punch line put this story over top
This story was lacking in detail and juice of the "incest-taboo" group of stories. The relationship with Capucine is just as juicey and arousing as the encounter with Binne. The punch line removed the conflict and gaave awesome resolution to the tension which had built the story to its present level of engagement. My compliments to the author.
regards, goldenalbert
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