All Comments on 'The Visitor'

by Bane

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amasterfoundamasterfoundover 17 years ago
Good story

Good story! I really enjoyed his confusion on what was going on. It was very interesting reading about him trying to figure out where he knew her from. I think it would have been better if you had clued the reader into who she was.

This story will be mentioned in the Author's hangout in the review section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Absolutely brilliant

Bane, whoever you are, the Ella stories are superb and this one takes the cake. Dp you have any more stories?

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