All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 16'

by jushorny

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Short, sweet, and . . .

romantic. I really feel the care and love coming across in these chapters of Dry Valley. I also feel things are beginning to climax and I don't mean just in orgasmic bliss either.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A great series

jushorny:

The story seems to be rushing towards a conclusion. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
so good

Love these two characters! THose last two paragraphs were so delicious. So glad they finally made love.

Thanks for continuing this story.

gotwood49gotwood49over 17 years ago
another nice chapter, jus...

Jus, you did a remarkable job on your chapter, leading us all forward with style, and your usual sense of passion. Thank you very much for a good read!

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