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by jzimmerli08/14/06

Ahhh

OK the story line itself is ok but there are a lot of edits needed..is the sister Dorthy or Jenny? Along with the instead of there or they.

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by Anonymous08/14/06

E for Effort

The editing was bad, but I loved the story line and your descriptions were great.

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