All Comments on 'Say It Ch. 02'

Wow...just...that was excellent. Please continue.

Very good set up. I like the way she transforms herself as her encounter goes on. Very deserving of a 3rd chapter.

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i wish this would happen to me...hmmm

Please finish this! Oh, this was so good, one of my favourites so far.

And yeah, I could go for this, too.

That this is a good ending in itself

OMG! Please keep writing!

You are killing me !!! Please write more soon.

but there's no lead in to how they know each other...she just walks into the coffee shop, introduces herself & then this awesome story begins.

Would be even better with more description...

Look forward to the next chapter. :)

You're a fucking tease