All Comments on 'A Crack in the Fence'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellant

Thanks for a great story, the characters were believable and their unhurried decision was realistic. I adored the teasing and the eventual swaps the lovemaking was both erotic and stimulating. It really made me wet, not every story does that. The fact they are happy to repeat their actions is good and wonder if there could be a story there.

Kim UK

kimnicelips@gmail.com

docBluedocBlueabout 13 years ago
Fantastic story

and good writing too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice writing - Ken and Barbie names a nice touch

Nice believable story -- even to arranging for Brad and Julie's girls to be at the grandparents for a repeat weekend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This is a very erotic story!

You make fucking the neighbour's wife, watching your wife get fucked by the neighbour, and eating each other's sperm out of the wives, a very exciting and erotic experience!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
realistic breasts

Thanks for injecting realism in this story. Writing about pendulous breasts that hung off towards her sides and move all around during sex is so much more erotic that "her perky breasts without a trace of sag."

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