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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust08/10/06

I enjoyed

the first stanza with its good imagery but the second stanza feels a little weak, esp with the line 'clothes can't come off fast enough'

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by vampiredust08/10/06

mention

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by vampiredust08/10/06

apology

sorry, meant to give you 75 for my last comment

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