All Comments on 'Power Out'

by marybethf

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TE999TE999over 17 years ago
A Little Jewel

Tight plotting and excellent dialogue. This sexy little tale deserves, no, begs for, a sequel. Good job, MBF.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
old friendships

It's a fact. Old friendships renewed are solid gold. Thanks for reminding me ... helping me remember.

Don1028Don1028over 17 years ago
I didn't finish it. I personally would have liked

the story better if the history between them had been a touch less. Maybe only teen kissing and a hint of joint masturbation.

That way this encounter would have been a little less obvious and more erotic.

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