by Luckie_Duckie
I read the first chapter of this "story" the other day. Please resubmit under the correct title.
I really like this chapter so far. Not sure how it connects to the first chapter yet, but I would like to read more. Your characters are very real with depth and dimension to them. Interesting and interested.
It’s obvious that this story has nothing to do with chapter 1.
So why has it not been corrected?!
It’s very irritating that I read this story trying to figure out how to connect the two unrelated stories.
Disappointed.