All Comments on 'I thought it was a song'

but it was just your poetry (~_~) the last line struck me, then again, I DON'T LIKE NEEDLES <Grin'n... but I read your poem!

I like this to the point where I want to say...something isn't just right with the last 2 lines.

Somehow, the last part could be better, maybe I'm wrong, but thats just my perception. I almost gave you a 5 anyway, but the end bugs me, not the needle part, the wording on the next to last line.

still, enjoyed reading your work, you are already showing improvement and you have been here, what, barely 2 months?

hugs

maria