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funny how sex is alot like fighting <grin I enjoyed your poem!

Nicely crafted pacing and verbal punching. The poem not only conveys the heat of the moment for the speaker, but the words convey the brutal lust of the experience. Good.

after reading a pretty big portion of your works , this one caught me and I want my first comment to be here ... I don't know why this poem is so powerful in my eyes ... the metephors which are so accurate ... the whole situation is just bearthtaking ... beutifuly executed ... keep it up - H K

great visuals!