Carol Ch. 15

Great series

Thanks for the great series. I fell in love with Carol. Looking forward to your next submission.

great ending great story

Terrific end to a terrific story. I am glad that you maintained the tone and the dynamics from beginning to end; that made Carol and the protagonist believable and realistic. If you have the urge, as it were, please return to Carol and detail some of her left out adventures-hooking on the way to New Orleans, blowing her father's friends, etc., all seem promising for further adventures. Thanks for writing this great story.

GREAT Story !!!!

Dear flinchny010,

I read all the chapters and J/O to every one of them. i really liked the ending in Chapter 15. The ending you provided can go any and everywhere.

Thanks for a great fantasy

Fantastic - more carol please.

This was awsome the best thing i've read here - Carol is so utterly believable you simply have to keep going, trouble is now everything else will seem second rate - hey you may of spoilt my Literotica Time - but worth it, excellent.

Excellent, when are you going to write rhe next episodes?

I couldn't stop until I had read them all, so captivating, just like Carol!

A Bit Late But I've Just Read These...

This is an excellent series of stories.

I hope you decide to share more with us one day.

Thanks.

Thanks

I've read this series now three times, spread out over several years. It is without doubt one of my favorites ... not necessarily because all of the story line pushes my "hot buttons" (though much of it does), but because I have an appreciation for the talent in writing that is exemplified here. You need not be verbose to say a lot. I don't know what you do for a living, but if you're not writing, you're stealing from the world. :-) Thanks for the hours of pleasure you've given us.

Carol

It should not have ended. It was a very good story and could have added chapters about their future antics together.

I actually fucking cried.

the best

Loved it mate.

Easily my favorite erotic story I've ever read.

best ending ever!!!

I, married one of those , not quite that wild...but close. Lasted 45 of the best years of my life. I miss her ever day.