All Comments on 'Honeymoon Surprise'

by Dar_Jisbo

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Omega ManOmega Manover 17 years ago
Beautiful

What a beautiful story, you're so lucky.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Okay story telling

But the very idea that a conservation Catholic girl, raised in that environment would bring both restraints and a blindfold on her honeymoon was just WAY over the top. Those kids in Concord just don't roll that way.

Dar_JisboDar_Jisboalmost 9 years agoAuthor
This one did

Perhaps you may have noticed that not all Catholic schoolgirls are innocent.

I got an earful from this one's parents about how she turned out wrong. I pointed out that she was happily married and would make a good housewife for a long time to come.

(Yep, another true story, though I anonymized the details. Back when I wrote it, it was very difficult for me to come up with good ideas for stories, so I used actual experiences from people I knew.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Kinky crazy Catholic kids

Bu they play good football out on Treat Blvd in Walnut Creek.

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