All Comments  for

The Journeys of Kiba

bySlappy101©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/06/06

Great story

I really enjoyed this story. A wolfman, a birdwoman and a cat woman; those are some interesting people to have in a story. I hope there are more journeys of Kiba.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/17/06

Great!

Amazing Story! I loved it! and im not just saying that because Akhaani is based off of my char

-Akhaani

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/08/10

The story would have been much better ...

... if the main character didn't come across as such a jerk :-(

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Slappy10103/08/10

Thank you

Thank you for your feedback "Anonymous", I understand what you mean. What I was going for with this story though is a darker tone, and a realistic character, he's not really a hero, more of an anti-hero. Not everyone will like that, but hopefully you were still able to enjoy the story a bit. Check out some of my other work and maybe you will enjoy that more.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to The Journeys of Kiba  or
More submissions by Slappy101.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel