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Carolyn and John Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/21/06

more please

I really think you have a great story i will be looking for chapter 2.
Pat M.
USA

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by Mystery_Meat08/21/06

Welcome to Literotica

Off to a steamy, well-written start. Looking forward to a more graphic part two.

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by Anonymous09/08/06

great start !!!!!!!!!

keep this going! nice for once to read a story about a neglected black wife going for a white man.

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by THELOVELY1GLO01/28/11

Lustful

One look was all it took, now this!!!

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