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this is very intense and powerful
I'm not sure how realistic it is--all they have to do is video the guy while he's fucking Natasha, then blackmail him in return.
It's hard to imagine the fiance putting up with this.
I look forward to seeing how you continue the story.
ohio
Same ole same ole
Same ole stereotype of the black male. Same ole punking out of the white male. Average story average vote
very intense and powerful indeed
I so looked forward to this new chapter and I was not disappointed. I am looking so forward to the next chapter.
Disturbing
In this category you know you have a good story when it leave you disturbed. I loved the point of view choose wich is original and more realistic.
hot hot hot
excellent character development
It is same ol same ol
I agree with a previous reviewer that this story is founded too much on cliches. Also, Derrick may be a black lawyer with a big cock on a power trip, but Jon is an Army officer who served in Afghanistan, not that one could tell from him acting as a wimp. I hope that he wasn't in a combat unit because I'd worry for the men under his command.
don't understand
I don't understand why/how he can go along unless it's to make sure that he can end their relationship. No "love" is worth being humiliated like this. It seems indeed to come down to the same cliché used over and over again on this site : the black hung stud playing the power game, the boyfriend just nodding yes to his girlfriend I know I wouldn't accept it, ever, lawyer or not and no matter the consequenses even if just to bring it out in the open. What kind of realtionship lays ahead? No, never. He doesn't have to beat the guy up. There are other ways to get back at him. G.Belgium.
Still haunted by the slavery complex
I wonder if this kind of writing is a form of therapy or if in fact it makes things worse...
Clearly there is still the internal need "to prove" that previous ancestory enslavement, rape and humiliation have not passed somehow into one's genes. So to wipe any such possibility the writer needs to mentally humiliate white men and women.
The problem - all this time he does not realize that as long as he continues to obsses over this he is still mentally enslaved. How do you break this mental loop?
story per say isn't bad
though I'll never understand the motivation of the characters. The boss is clear, he gets to fuck some hot slut, the wife is clear, she's a slut who just loves cock (clearly she doesn't love her partner), but what about the partner? Obviously he gets nothing out of the deal, is he to stupid to see that the wife is manipulating him? He should be taking pictures to use in the divorce trail, ruining the career of the blackmailer, let the slut go to jail who cares? Hell, it's not like she's the only attractive woman on the planet. Nothing would be worth putting up with this without some quid pro quo. Maybe if he was getting some strange as well, for every sex act you performed for your boss, he gets to go outside the relationship as well. Hell, he could have fun catching up! Even then, I don't think it'd be worth putting up with that crap, especially as it hadn't been pre arrainged before hand. Partner swapping could be fun with discussions beforehand, but not in this situation where she hid things from him. Where's the loyalty one should be able to expect from one's spouse? Kick her to the curb and ruin her life as well as her lover's.
Really
A piece of shit, in real life dickhead dies, stupid story.
And..of course..the story never continued...
...you´ve chosen the wrong nom de voyage...ForceLess would suit you better...
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