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A Good Story
I like sexy stories to be also romantic. This is a good sexy story that also tells about two people who fall in love. Anyway, I found it to be well written and enjoyable. Maybe some day the author will continue their story, as we get to glimpse their love making in married life.
Enjoyed it
It's very romantic and enjoyable. Nerds get sexy too!!!
Only a few comments about the grammar. Noticed a "there" that should've been "their." A few commas missing when one character is addressing the other. But those are easy to fix, and you've got the knack of writing, so keep going!
A Really Good Story
I enjoyed this little story very much. It was sweet and believable, something I always look for because I am a hopeless romantic. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Tony
Your story
Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).
That was truly beautiful!
I just loved that story. I too am a hopeless romantic, so that really made my heart skip a beat! Very nicely done!
AWWWW!
Amazing how close a dance in the rain can bring people. Loved the story, I'm a sucker for a good romace and this was good! Might there be more coming? Please? ^_~
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