All Comments on 'The Trouble with Sex'

Started strong, finished weak. Hope the audience received it well.

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

It had some really good lines. I like the very last one the best, as an analogy to neanderthals, "find a nice club, find a girl you like, get her smashed and take her home". Now that's clever.

I really liked this! I want to share it with my buddies, and I want to credit you - except I don't know how to without admiting I was reading porn at 3am on a work night.. darn it!

a crack up...crack up...one thing..it's male not mail in your letterbox...maybe you were thinking boxes thou lol

Because being that trashed needs to up the ante...

I'll give you one star IF you never aduse comedy again.