by cracker_jack
Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).
It had some really good lines. I like the very last one the best, as an analogy to neanderthals, "find a nice club, find a girl you like, get her smashed and take her home". Now that's clever.
I really liked this! I want to share it with my buddies, and I want to credit you - except I don't know how to without admiting I was reading porn at 3am on a work night.. darn it!
a crack up...crack up...one thing..it's male not mail in your letterbox...maybe you were thinking boxes thou lol
Because being that trashed needs to up the ante...