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by Seduceros208/19/06

Yea Verily

Smooth and well paced, I like the way you've tinted erotic the very difficulty of writing erotic poetry.

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by My Erotic Trail08/19/06

mention

this poem is mentioned in the New Poem Reviews

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by irishcatsmeow08/22/06

Very clever...

I do like this!

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by KOLKORE08/22/06

Lovers - beware of all things routine!

Ok, I am working on fresh and original one liners for my wife, but IT'S HARD! Seriously, I loved your poem. The way you play with the language; turning cliché’s of erotic prowess at the beginnings of lines into ruins in a quick shift of a phrase.
Could not help thinking about one chanson by Georges Brassens in which the lover vows to never marry the love of his life - so that he could prevent their love from unavoidable destruction…

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