All Comments on 'A New Home Ch. 03'

by vic_elor

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VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Sweet

A cool ending wrapping it up with one of the letters he probably never got. A decently sweet note to leave the story on, well done.

JatunisJatunisover 12 years ago
Continue?

I really hope there is a continuation, I love reading these kind of stories and I would love to see how it ends after that letter

imsbillyimsbillyalmost 9 years ago
What?

This is a total disconnect from the rest of the story. If I'm reading this right, this is while he is away at college. To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. This story had the chance to be a really great story, but the plot line is out of sync and very underdeveloped with some huge gaps.

OlebillOlebillabout 8 years ago
loved it

I am glad that you hear the story from both sides and that his sister saved herself for him and due to parents death they may. Never got together by t they did and it worked out great. No interference from other men and women just the two work it out and they did. Ending was nice to read part of her diary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Crap

What a load of crap.

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