All Comments on 'Rachael's Story'

good start, keep at it, please continue, i want to see what happens with the evil stepmother and siblings...smile. thank you.

need to expand and continue beyond the first fuck. Maybe get some fatherly dominance into it and submission of fridgid mother.............

..oooooh did she ever please her daddy..mmmmmm....yummy

awesome story!

Damn

From a woman's perspective, that made me jizz all over.. was one of the best orgasms I've ever had. Keep up the magnificent work!

nice story...keep on

needs work but still kind of hot

Story was awesome great detail. Liked how you kept bring back the

"tiny blue panties"

Fuck this is so fucking good