All Comments on 'You Have to Meet this Guy'

It is an interesting story but is not always convincing. I read it to the end which means something but in this genre, I expect a bit of a 'turn-on'. Spelling and some grammer problems need work. Simple things like 'stake' when you meant 'steak'.

Make more chapters with more descriptions, and it will be more delicious...

This was a great story, true or untrue, it was great, thx for taking the time, I joined so i could keep that story handy, amazing, thanks....

P.S.. grammar or not, it's the story and how it reaches ur readers.. u did it!!!

I like the way your mind works. Would love to hear more.