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by vampiredust08/20/06

Excellent

An excellent narrative poem. I enjoyed all the little details you put in, such as

'She smelled of the little store's camphor and
Flowery perfume. The blue of her eyes almost hid
The scratches on her old contact lenses'

Much enjoyed, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by My Erotic Trail08/20/06

grinin'

not only do I like Luckenbauch, I live between ft worth and houston

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by Anonymous12/24/06

Makes me feel like I was watching her.............

Good stuff

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