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Beautiful
Erotica is generally thought of in somewhat sleazy terms, but this story is one of pure love, not lust. I commend you, Sir and if this tale be true will pray for the return of your love to you.
Exquisitely Told!
What can be said about such a wonderful poignant, sensitive story. That there was a deep and abiding love, that in a sense it was lovingly, and wonderously new. Though the ending was tragic, I liked the way the Writer left his readers with at least a forlorn hope of reconciliation. A Story most Memorable!
too beautiful for words
A very vivid story of a first time encounter. Obviously this was a time filled with love. This is indeed a memory to cherish.
great story
you put a lot of feeling in your story, great job!
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