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Late Night Shopping

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by duddle14608/25/06

Loved it!

Damn, does anyone know where I can buy a Parrot with that vocabulary? I thought the whole story was downright hilarious and sometimes almost felt the mother's pain of embarrassment. I like the way Mama persevered. *laughing* Leaving me to wonder: Is that what Mothers and Daughters do in their spare time? *grins* Funny, Funny story.

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by walkingeagle08/27/06

Great story! Humorous, true to life and arousing!

I really enjoyed this! Brandi tells her story with humor, and sensuality! It's great to smile and be aroused!

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by Anonymous09/03/06

Nice plausible scenario! :P Loved everything... :)

It just keeps getting better and better the more times i come back to it and read it. :) ~Nel L

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by archetype04/06/08

Humour in Erotica

I think I read somewhere that you shouldn't use humour writing erotica. Well, blah, blah blah. That just shows close mindedness. Loved the story, could actually feel the author's discomfort. Good job, especially the parrot.

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by Anonymous02/07/13

Honest

So many of these stories are unbelievable. Yours might not have been erotic, but is was real and amusing! :)

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