It was a good story but too short, not enuf description of the action or feelings, kind of like a short jack-off. I do suggest you keep writing, for the practice.
I'll admit, you got me a bit spoiled with the daily updates in your other series, Family Circus, so I was a bit disappointed that you haven't continued it for two days , but this story
kind of makes up for it (though I still want to see more of the other tale, plus some more stories of Hut, but I digress). You got a good "classic" mother/son story going here. And, unlike some of your other stories, I like that you got to the sex rather quickly here. So, please continue. There's lot of room here. You mentioned an older sister, so where is she? The mother keeps coming to him @ night, and then leaving after sex, not staying in bed with him all night. Is that because the sister lives with them, so the mother is trying to sneak around and not get caught? Great potential storyline there, as the sister finds out and then eventually joins in. Well, whatever direction you decide to go in, I'm looking forward to it.
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Anonymous02/17/07
Yes
You gave excellent detail of their fucking. I especially liked her having her son shove his cock deep inside when he came in her. It is a nice hot mother-son story. Please keep them coming.
i enjoyed that !! ,,,i see more chapters at the right ,,,hmmm, ready for more from this family!! usually i like brother/sister incest, but this was a plausible situation,,thank you!
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Anonymous05/07/11
mhmmmm
that was quite a sexy story, keep up the good work!
English
too short
It was a good story but too short, not enuf description of the action or feelings, kind of like a short jack-off. I do suggest you keep writing, for the practice.
Good story!
I'll admit, you got me a bit spoiled with the daily updates in your other series, Family Circus, so I was a bit disappointed that you haven't continued it for two days , but this story
kind of makes up for it (though I still want to see more of the other tale, plus some more stories of Hut, but I digress). You got a good "classic" mother/son story going here. And, unlike some of your other stories, I like that you got to the sex rather quickly here. So, please continue. There's lot of room here. You mentioned an older sister, so where is she? The mother keeps coming to him @ night, and then leaving after sex, not staying in bed with him all night. Is that because the sister lives with them, so the mother is trying to sneak around and not get caught? Great potential storyline there, as the sister finds out and then eventually joins in. Well, whatever direction you decide to go in, I'm looking forward to it.
Yes
You gave excellent detail of their fucking. I especially liked her having her son shove his cock deep inside when he came in her. It is a nice hot mother-son story. Please keep them coming.
Mother/son
There was no build up to the story - mother nearly raped him - please give us some more stories like this but build into them - Ta
that was fun
i enjoyed that !! ,,,i see more chapters at the right ,,,hmmm, ready for more from this family!! usually i like brother/sister incest, but this was a plausible situation,,thank you!
mhmmmm
that was quite a sexy story, keep up the good work!
Great read
I enjoyed reading this story...described it to the T..but...it was way too short... :)
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