All Comments on 'Three poems of Introduction'

All three are good, to varying degrees, but the first poem should stand alone. The last two poems are like a tail dangling on a woman. Sure, a few people will get a thrill out of it, but most of them will find that the woman looks better without the tail... and the tail without the woman.

reading as ever. I loved the imagery, esp in the second poem.

Congrats on the E, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

That was my personal favorite; almost a manifesto (always been a sucker for those). But in a way that has been the exception. Mostly it's s a collection of sensual images from every where - don't worry about cohesiveness, somehow it works!

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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